Typing the words "Looking For Feedback" is a ritual that summons me from the ether!
Alright, let's have a quick overview here...
So the cover has some really nice typography, very "modern Disney show" vibe, I dig it. The composition is a little weak on the characters though, they're all weirdly bunched together slightly to the left for some reason, and they're pretty static and mostly look either mildly anxious or a bit bored, which doesn't effectively sell "this is an exciting adventure!". A bit more energy, emotion or dynamism, or a cover design that better gets across what this comic is about would really help. It's about people who do magic, so maybe have people doing cool magic stuff on the cover?
The presentation of the comic is pretty nice, with a good comic font at an easy to read size and nice big speech bubbles. That's always nice to see!
The art is decently-drawn, but often static and dull to look at due to unexciting compositional choices. A lot of shots of characters standing with their arms down by their sides facing straight on, viewed from a very straight-on sort of angle,. There's often too much space around a character in a frame, but without enough detail to make the frame feel full. I think some finer lines and more muted colours on backgrounds, and maybe more texture or detail would really help both the characters to pop from the environments, and the scenes to feel more "full".
The drawing itself is mostly okay, though the heads tend a little big for the bodies maybe? Often the arms feel a bit short, or hands a bit small. I'm not personally a huge fan of the very smoothed-out inking style, because it often makes the art look a bit static, and... Flash animation-y? That could be a personal preference though.
Story-wise, it's cute, very much the plot of a saturday morning cartoon from the 00s sort of vibe, and doing decently at being that, though it does lack a sense of any strong stakes or drama, it's a bit tame, especially early on, and lacks urgency, so I didn't feel compelled to read to find out what happens next. A few long-ish updates in, it feels like the worst thing that could happen to this protagonist if she fails at her goal is she might disappoint her mum a bit, and it's like "wow, this story about somebody learning to harness magic has lower stakes than most stories about coming out as gay to your family.. or even most real life instances of doing that..." The general vibe of the comic feeling like it's for young children does also feel like an odd fit for Tapas, a platform where the average reader is about twenty years old.
Overall, it's not badly excecuted, and it's actually pretty well-presented, it's just a bit... tame. Both the art and story could use some more "oomph!" to them.