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Feb 2020

Hi to anyone reading this I hope you have awesome day. Any who I need some feedback on the art style of my comic

Thank you for your time reading my comment.

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I really like the look on the very first page/episode.
The side angles seem a bit different though. Not sure if the other pages were drawn quickly but they don't have the same personality. Lot's of potential though.

Thanks, for the pages I have a problem where I analyze too much. So, to help me get over analyzing every little details. I draw each comic page in quickly to not get hook up on the details and loosing up.

Looks alright, but would need a little more background.

And as for updating new pages, try to do it weekly. This will give you time to develop your art styles and give your viewers a chance to breath like mine.

You can take a peek if you want and can see how many days it takes for me to update.

the art style of your characters is really fun and cute, reminds me of some of 2000's edgy cartoons. I love how expressive they are with their bodylanguage and hand gestures especially!

the spider's design is perfect, very charming with good shapes.

The human's jaw area could be a bit more consistent, shape and design wise. seems your style lends itself a lot better to rounded edges than squared, which his face shifts between a couple times at more difficult angles. Of course, not every page needs to be drawn perfectly, it's good to know when to throw in the towel and not worry about anatomy. But yeah, your art look good!