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Jun 2022

Also if possible we could also like and subscribe to each other in return and give helpful criticism.

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Thanks for the opportunity, I always appreciate having new eyes on my work.
Just as a fair warning, it's not a serialized piece, but a collection of shorts somewhat tied together loosely aesthetically and thematically, so feel free to jump around as you want.
I'll try to take a look at your series later today and leave some feedback comments (maybe provide a link for convenience?)

Thank you, I'll be sure to check out yours as well and get invested in your 5 chapters!

Heck, I'll bite. I'm super new and can use a critique or someone to bounce things off of. I took a peak and enjoyed the cover and thumbnail, I am a bit of a critique though, already have some feedback for the blurb/synopsis.

I'll try to read through it later today! :slight_smile:

I suppose after I start reading I'll post a link to my own. Or you can click my name and hunt me down. Can't stop you there.

I think I'll just search up your link and check your story out, I'll be glad to review.

Hey just wanted to say thanks for the advice, I'm working more with Grammarily and trying to make slow changes, also got your concept with your story and vampires was pretty awesome and well executed, if I've got time I will check out more. All and all good read.

Thanks a lot! I tend to write more than I read, but that's bad practice in our field. I plan to check out more of your story as well I like the old-time noir-Esque vibe that's going on, with paranormal bits. It reminds me of Blue exorcist a bit. And I loved that show.

And I'm glad you find Grammarly useful. I'm about to use it to fix 6 typos in this message. ;p

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