But I want to make friends.
I want to find critique partners and talk about art and writing and just... have writing friends.
Some descriptions about my stories. Please give me feedback on them.
The stories I'm working on are intricate fantasy stories with mystery plots, all intellectual, with a lot of focus on beauty, fancy jewelry, etc. They're BL, but in worlds with no gender construct at all, so everyone is pansexual. They're just really quiet, slow-paced, toned-down sorts of things, but really detailed, and emotional... this is why I need feedback.
~ Celestial Stone: Outline -> https://t.co/z4wzuQoy4j Critique would be appreciated. I also have two chapters posted here, but they're an old draft...
~ Emerald Prince: Evindr, Prince Regent of Calanthe, cannot take the throne and become the next true prince. No one knows why, but he has been searching for the true prince for longer than they can accept. Just when the fragile status seems like it with collapse, Evindr returns from a journey with Julien, a mysterious, clueless person who Evindr claims is the true prince. But what is the truth? When a magical orb is stolen from the palace, the fate of the city and magic itself could be at stake if Evindr and Julien can't come to terms with their secrets and their pasts.
~ Crown of Altair (longer series): Andrea, a human, just wants to be reunited with Claudio, the magician prince with whom he fell in love while they were in music school together. But in order to do that, he must cooperate with the witch, Enna. There are those who aim to start a war between the four magical factions - Witches, Magicians, Sorcerers, and Alchemists, and Enna aims to prevent a war by finding Iskandar, Prince Altair, before the others can kidnap him and steal his power. Through spending time with Enna, Andrea realizes he can't go back to a normal life... (first arc is episodic mysteries in a city, but then it gets more involved.
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I really cannot get any further in what I'm writing without having someone to ask for help. I've tried posting the beginning before I finish the whole story, and it makes me really, really, uncomfortable. That's just not how I work.
So like.
Is this okay?
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