You got crazy potential here. You've got an odd comic with a visual style that is incredibly easy to digest and "kawaii" in a sense.
I don't like the constant face shots and lack of proper environmental shots (makes it a little hard to follow and gets nauseating after a while."
The dialog is cute and natural, two things I can't seem to be good at ha-ha.
Definitely make a it little easier to read on computers, I understand it's a scroll comic, but it's a tad too big to fit properly on a computer screen ha-ha. I had to pull out my phone to read it. (My comic is too big as well, gotta size it accordingly.)
If you've got the time, check out some media to learn about proper framing. I recommend watching clips from a couple movies and shows.
The Good, the Bad and the Ugly (Incredible cinemaphotography)
Samurai Champloo (Really creative camera shots and environmental frames)
No Country for Old Men (One of the best shot movies ever (In my opinion)
Otherwise, keep doing what you do best! I like where it's going and see a lot of potential in your work. In fact, I see more potential in you than myself lmao.
Cheers!