I love the little tinges of colour in the otherwise monotone comic, and the action sequence are really swift and builds the momentum. However, it was kind of difficult to determine which is the next panel.
I suggest you space the panels a little bit more, so that the images don't get too jumbled up. Don't get me wrong, I like the aesthetic of the images jutting out of the panel, but too many in one succession will only lead to confusion.
And I think the action scenes will look more impactful and intense if the action lines (lines signifying movement and intensity) are bolder and more numerous.
Also as a side note, I noticed that you didn't use punctuations in the dialogues. Punctuations are crucial in distinguishing one sentence from another, and also injecting emotions into narrative, so I suggest you fix that too.
I'm looking forward to more of your works!