As an author, I appreciate the steamy and passionate scene that you have written. The chemistry between the characters is palpable, and the way you describe their actions and movements is vivid and engaging.
I particularly enjoyed the way you portrayed the tension between the characters, both in their physical interactions and their verbal exchanges. The back-and-forth of their desire for each other creates a sense of anticipation and excitement that keeps the reader hooked.
Your attention to detail in describing the characters' actions and sensations also adds to the realism of the scene. From the way Kiral's hand moves down the protagonist's body to the feel of his member in her hands, every detail is carefully crafted to create an immersive and sensual experience.
Overall, I think this is a well-written and engaging scene that is sure to captivate readers who enjoy steamy romance. Keep up the good work!