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Here is my input.
There has to be a somehow explained/understandable reason why she wants the guy to stay.
She finds him unconcious, he shoots some guys, she takes him home and then she thinks that
she doesn´t want him to go away. That leaves me thinking why? Why doesn´t she want him
to leave, why doesn´t she think that she is in danger?
Here is my input on the art. Some of it looks very detailed and advanced, the finish looks rushed.
I would prefer a simple style which looks more in one style instead of some parts which look like
they are traced, rushed rendering and then some parts which look like you actually drew them
in your style.
I hope that helps and I hope I haven´t been to harsh. I´m looking forward to see how it develops
