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Nov 2019

Hi guys, i am writing a novel and i am really new in writing. i love writing and so i decided to work on this cool idea for a novel. but i cannot figure out what to name it. So, basically there is woman who gave birth to eight twins and killed one at birth (for a reason that i am saving for later) and that woman in this magical world is a being called "Cursed". so this is a story of how those 7 kids then survive.
any help would be great!!!

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Don't know what to expect from it, since you didn't give us genres buuut.
I think that the name, "Seven Lives of a Curse" could suit it, what do you think?

8 twins??? Do you mean octuplets or 4 pairs of twins? Either one would be fascinating lol

Anyways, I'd go with a simple, on-the-nose title just based on this brief description, like.. "The Curse of Seven" just bc idk what else is going on?? Like the title would also depend on the genre, which you didn't really mention. I'd assume the story leans more towards drama?

also @ar-ninetysix
its 8 kids., so i guess octuplets. But like they are faternal. and no its not drama. its action and fantasy set in a fictional world. i am sorry i was not clear enough.

here is the first chapter. do tell me what i lack in. i really need some criticism right now. i was going to post it in a new forum. since i am new, i know i probably made a lot of mistakes and i would love to hear you guys's thoughts on it. and please ignore the name, i had to put something for now.
thanks in advance!! :slight_smile: