R.R.Raymonds
Ronald R. Raymond
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Hi i am a new writer and this is my first novel! need some support!!
Hi Guys! I have been working on a new novel and I need help to find out mistakes and also how is it? is it enjoyable? please help me out as I am a noob with no prior experience in writing. I would be thankful and grateful to all you guys for helping me out. Here is the link.
I have 7 characters, i will put as much as details i can, draw any you like! Allen - he is around 13 yrs old. Average height not so tall not so short either. Golden hair - super smooth and silky like if wind blows you could probably see his every single hair blowing with it. Blue eyes and always t…
@IndigoShirtProd Got it! thanks you for the response! means a lot to me!
Ohh i see! that is a really good idea and i think i will go with that for now! thank you so much!!
Got it! thanks i am going to read it now !
@IndigoShirtProd yes i do! i have written like the basic story for all the first book or more like first 30-40 chapters. on how it would go! its just that when it comes to writing with all technicalities it's hard! I am still working on the advice you gave yesterday! so i changed the way story star…
I am working on it will post in a hour or so when i am done!
Oh, I see. I will try doing it and see if it is any better and also I figured after reading a few chapters of the song of ice and fire that I could just do 1 chapter for 1 of them each. @Kelheor I am working on the first chapter right now as soon as I am done I will post it here! it would be great i…
I have not! Thank you, will do now!!
Thanks for the advice! 
Hey guys! I am working on a novel where I have 7 main characters, I suck but I got help from you guys and now am working on a different approach for starting the story but the problem I am facing now is that it's really getting hard for me to switch from one character to another. The seven of them h…
Thanks you so much for this! I will work on it. Yes English is not my first language and yea i really am bad at a lot of stuff so i am grateful to you for all these pointers! Again thank you so much and i will work on all these things that you have told me! Thank you! You have a great day!
Hey guys, i am really new writter. i have writting something would love to get some criticism and advice on what area to imporve and overall quality too! Also please ignore the name XD i will change it trying to find something better rn! Thank you and you all have a wonderful day!
also @ar-ninetysix its 8 kids., so i guess octuplets. But like they are faternal. and no its not drama. its action and fantasy set in a fictional world. i am sorry i was not clear enough. here is the first chapter. do tell me what i lack in. i really need some criticism right now. i was going …
Hi guys, i am writing a novel and i am really new in writing. i love writing and so i decided to work on this cool idea for a novel. but i cannot figure out what to name it. So, basically there is woman who gave birth to eight twins and killed one at birth (for a reason that i am saving for later) a…
Thank You so much guys! you helped me a lot. i am going to look into as you said and see if i can find anything! thank you so much for helping me out!!!
Hi guys, i am a really young and aspiring writer. i am really bad at drawing but i love writing to death! I am working on this really cool idea and i need to get a cover art for it.Please help me out here a bit i would be grateful to you!!