i think your comic is really good I like it, the only thing is a that there is a lot of info in the first chapter which is a little overwhelming its not a bad thing it just can be hard to understand at times because there is so much text, but that said overall i think it is very good and good enough to be published .maybe cut you episode length in half so the reader can have time to take in everything. if your interested here's my comic it's a WIP https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/lions-den-/list?title_no=371341&page=2
