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Oct 2017

working on a story that I need a title for

When Duggan Wakes up from a Coma, He and his frenemy Carlos are pursued by mysterious Agents, desperate to stop Duggan before he remembers. Helped by Some of Carlos's Friends, Duggan and Carlos, realise there is more to reality than meets the eye.

The story has elements of the matrix and The Adjustment Bureau.

The story needs a title and I am stuck for ideas. any suggestions?

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Remembrance, Deep Thought, Dream Loss, Duggan's wild party romp (humour, not a serious suggestion), a few suggestions based on the idea of a loss of memory, Black site memory, Runnermouth, maybe pick an aspect of a character or location perniant to the story, a site, a code name, or, maybe just go with the characters first name Duggan, lots of options for you to consider,

  • Deep Duggan
  • 40 Days of Duggan
  • Duggan Does Dallas
  • The Story of Duggan
  • The Devil in Mister Duggan
  • Duggan and Carlos
dugganduggandugganduggandugganduggandugganduggandugganduggandugganduggan

Awakening.

Comatose.

Two ideas, kind of opposites! Your story sounds interesting,good luck! And Duggan is a tremendous name.

Is this going to be essentially sci-fi/drama?
I could go for:
"Searching for a answer"
"Remember me"
"Forbidden Memories"
"Parallel truth"

Haha, hope this helps you find what you want!

Argh, you beat me. How very dare you!

If you're going for a Matrix thing, why not "The Desert of the Real"?

A title that comes to mind is Escape to Reality???

Some ideas to work around might/could be:
When Duggan and Carlos in a means to escape their pursuers come out at the end of a tunnel the world around them is stripped of life - nothing like the Bureau of Culture and Agriculture guaranteed the people of their new world they'd soon take refuge on - They're still on Earth... Not the new planet (enter planet name - I'd suggest "Vaxo" Pronounced Varo or Varos/Vaxos)

Wandering the dying world they discover a group of nomads who lead them through a barrier - inside nature is flourishing; but the nomads are being hunted down for their technology and knowledge - the Bureau actually wants destroy the world, rise a nation build on slavery and blood harvested from the people (Can change the concept there, I'm just going on various thought processes here) and with the memories Duggan has locked up in his head can bring down the corrupted Bureau for good.

I've been thinking of a comeback for a little while but nah, I've got nothing.

the mysterious world of Duggan
the Duggan effect
WAKE UP
Don't remember
remember Duggan
this is not real Duggan

The Forgotten Truth
The Forgotten Revelation
Duggan Tries To Wake Up
Duggan Isn't Real

I like these.

20 characters.

I like it but it would infringe upon Transformers copyright.

Thanks for the ideas - probably going with wiped for the title the story is roughly 80 pages and I have drawn the first 20 or so pages for the buffer the story will start next year end of January.

well.. try to be a bit creative, it's better just make "easy to remember" title by playing with rhyme or probably try popular words

here's my suggestion, i do not know what kind of story will be but i guess it will be focused on the memories, right?
- Re-Remember
- Before Blank
- Deep Inside
- Blank's Secret
- Break Amnesia

a lot of the story hinges on Duggans name. Duggan is his surname, noone ever calls him by his christian name, in the same way, Carlos visited Duggan Every month in hospital, but cant remember how long duggan has been in the coma