@Awesomeness_Studios It's looking pretty good now, displaying their personalities and a tiny hint of relationship right away!
Well, here's my tentative cover from the fixed up icon! I was going to fix that accursed bad profile view anyway based on the advice I got on another thread, but I also went and redid the effect a bit and mixed up the shading so it displays better at this size. I might still do a really nice one when I finish chapter one whenever that is, but right now the priority are the pages and not the promo art.(I could give him the cape, fix up the angle of his hat's brooch, make a cooler shattered background, but then I'm just spending an eternity better used on finishing a nice scene)