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Sep 2020

Hi I just published my very first proper comic and I will like to receive some feedback so If you could please read it that will be much helpful to see where I get things wrong.

Also English is my second language and I may have made some grammar mistakes here and there.

Peace!!!

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https://tapas.io/episode/187419520

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    Aug '20
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Pretty interesting opening. I did like the small text so show case the character muttering/getting quiet when nervous, but be careful on how small you make it though. You also want to make sure to spellcheck some of your words. Also, watch out for the paneling; on of the panels were cutting into a speech bubble why the MC was talking with the driver.

Other than that, you have something going here.

Thank you for the feedback!
Yeah English is not my first language so I make some mistakes here and there
I appreciated the honesty.
And yeah I'm planning to improve the layout the style and the panelling as I'm going along with the story.

i would try posting on webtoon or Instagram to get more subs. but don't doubt your self its great :smile:

2 months later

Hello everyone!
Here is a link to my webcomics and social media. Feel free to leave a comment, share, subscribe to my first comic. Very appreciated, thank you!