New Fantasy Series Shoutout | Feedback Needed

keac 2017-03-25 10:46:19 UTC #1

I just recently uploaded my new fantasy series, and since it's my first time making a story for a comic, I am aware that it needs room for improvement. So I need some feedback so that I might improve at some points. Thanks in advanced!

Link: https://tapas.io/series/Gat-Max

tiredfishcomi 2017-03-25 21:09:43 UTC #2

I like the concept and the characters look very interesting to me. A couple of small things I thought I mention. To me, the heads of the characters look small on their bodies. In addition, the perspective in the final panel looks a little off to me. These might be stylistic choices, so you can take this feedback with a grain of salt.

If you are interested, please check out my comic Bland Basic Simplicity.

keac 2017-03-25 22:46:34 UTC #3

I guess I am quite aware of that. Thanks for the feedback! I'd try making the heads a little bigger, because I am pretty much aware that I get frustrated on how to properly place the head.

UncleVlad 2017-03-26 02:36:29 UTC #4

I think the floor pattern in the last panel is what is making it feel 'off'.

Aside from that, i think the colors and shading are pretty good. the panel and balloon layout seems pretty solid, too.