**Just a quick message before my review. I am here to help any artist improve their skills and never to put anyone down or offend anyone, please understand that any words in my review are only my opinion which I express solely to help you better your work. That being said, if you do not like or agree with my opinion please do not allow that to deter you from your project in any way!! We live in a tremendously creative world and you can never let one person's opinion hold you back from doing something incredible. Now on to the review.*
RoryReview#1 Voidchild
*The review
Voidchild is a unique story being told with great effort and passion from an amateur artist. While constantly striving to improve their artwork, Voidchild gets better visually as you continue through each page. Though the artist is new and learning to draw as they create each page, it certainly does not take away from the story elements and dialogue. Voidchild does a great job of creating mysterious characters with uncertain motives. With alot of time and effort Voidchild has the potential to be a very well done comic.
I split my review in two sections, this is where I will list things that may be in error or just general ideas which could help you improve.
*The fix
- There are a few minor dialogue mistakes
- A little homework on dialogue bubbles will help you tremendously, I feel it can get a bit confusing to tell who is talking and using the bubbles to point at characters in or out of frame will help clean things up.
- You love to use heavy white which takes away from your background. Look into contrast which you have some great uses of in your comic, if you can bring some more contrast to your pages they will go from "ok" to "stunning".
Overall I hope this helps, please continue to strive for the best you can do!!! I encourage everyone to support you and read Voidchild