Hi! Could you please give me constrictive criticism, thoughts and any feedback on my story (chapters 1-3 or less or more)? My story is a murder mystery with some romance and the main character struggles with her faith (or lack of it).
Some guiding questions (you don't have to answer all of them or any of these questions. Any feedback you have would be so appreciated):
1) How was your experience reading the letter, was it engaging/hooked you in (if so, what parts were engaging?)? or Did it throw you off/did you not like it (if so, do you recommend me not starting with one?)
2) Are the characters likable or annoying or both? Are they engaging, and do they make you want to follow their stories?
3) Was the dialogue boring or kept you engaged? Did the dialogue show the character's different personalities or are they too similar?
4) Did you feel the illustration was telling a story? Did it make the story more engaging/added a good thing or was it unneeded/distracting/out of place?
5) How was the flow of the story so far? Was it confusing (in a bad way), was there repetition in words or names that bothered you? Was their grammar, and spelling issues you found (and if so, were they distracting?). Did the third person POV bother you?
Thank you so much!