New: Rate my comic!

[Hellicat]

So I finished my first volume, you can find it here: Vila#1

Getting to the point, I want a little (a lot) of feedback for continuing to draw, like my style of drawing is good? How so? My story explain itself? Or I need to detail more. My jokes are even funny enough to maintain you reading? Stuff like that I want, I know i'm not the best at drawing but I really want to make some funny looking characters, and I wanna know if I'm doing this the right way.

Enough say, please give me some opinions.

[katou]

Handwritten font may not be the best course of action here; it slows down the pacing, and at times it is a little tricky to read. However, you do have an interesting (and fun) premise going on here. I'm also fond of Vila's design - it's simple and matches the vibe of the story (and I appreciate how she keeps the helm on (assuming that is not her head...). She comes across as very natural, and not annoyingly sardonic or irritatingly energetic.

It's definitely promising.

[Doubtcent]

Your premise is definitely your strong point. The overall tone is good well executed as well, even though your comic is very simple. One thing that you could benefit from is your writing. Not that it's bad, just that it needs a bit of proofreading. Also, much like @katou says, you could highly benefit from having your text not handwritten. It does give the comic its charm, but it can deter readers if they can't read it.

Otherwise, with its simplicity and off-branded humor, your comic has potential.

[Hellicat]

Thanks, I'll check for adding text because the current software I use doesn't have that option and switching may reduce the quality, your comments were so kind and helpful ( : thanks guys.

[davidloveii5]

If you don't have anything to use font in just try to practice on making letter take your time making them. But I love your work especially that it's white and grey it brings out more in your art. I would like to see more and I also very much like your sense of humor haha