So I was wondering if you guys would check out my new series, it only has the first Chapter.
if you could give a little review of what you thought that would be great in return.
I will give you 500 Ink for your time and review.
Nov '19Nov '19
So good start I feel. We are left in the dark like the person is. They obviously have a head injury causing some short term memory loss. We know already he did something, others may be upset at him about it, but there are others who either don't know or don't care because surviving is more important.
I look forward to future eps.
Thanks for the review I gave double the ink because i actulley have read your series a few times on webcomics app and webtoons, so you deserve it. Again thanks for the review 
It's hard to say too much about it, since it's just the first chapter, but I can say that it's a strong start. If everyone was dead, that'd be one thing, but to have one alive just long enough to blame the survivor, who has no memory of the event, now that's really enticing. Both the art and writing seem good so far, I don't think I have any ideas where it can be improved, especially since it's so short. Nevertheless, you certainly get peoples' attention from the start, and that's important.
I'll sub too, am curious to see where it goes. Best of luck with it
OMG OMG OMG
THIS IS HIGH QUALITY.
Your settings are just right. The question you as a reader has, is the one getting asked. And some part answered.
It is classic but same time unique and it works.
The art is 10/10 for a webcomic and you have planed the scroll from a mobile perspective well.
All in all, a very good start.
(If you wish to support me, remember to ad a driver name for my special Inksgiving Blue Kart comic1)
Any way
here are my main serie
Thank you for the review, i wanted people to tell me their first impressions because i think the first episode is what most people will decide on if they will continue reading or not. Thank you so much for your review. If you have a series please let me know and i will check it out.
Thank you for the review im glad to here that you liked it so much, I have sent you ink as well for taking your time reading it
I have a feeling your comic will go a long way. I love the art. I'm a huge fan of darker concepts so I had to subscribe. I'd love to see where you go with this. Nice job.
Ah sorry, dropped you some Ink but forgot to sub xD Did so now, haha. And you're welcome My own series is my first real adventure with comics, it's mostly just for practice, but you can check it out here: https://tapas.io/series/Wild-Souls1
Gotta admit it looks promising for a prologue.
You certainly look confident with the format, and I'm sure there will be surprises in the long run.
Keep it up.
I would also be very curious about how you would review my series. It's called "Ego - Obsessed", feel free to check it out!
Thank you for the ink.
Just letting you know that I'm running a inksgiving race where the supporter can support one of my characters to win the Grand Prix.
The names are:
Blue, Miss Blue, Yellow, Red, Purple
Who will you give your support to?
Ooh this is an interesting looking comic.
Overall, it's pretty polished in terms of the quality of the art and how it's put together, with a consistent art style, good inking and colours, but there are some things that jumped out at me:
The speech bubbles at times don't quite leave enough breathing room for the text inside them, and the thick white stroke on them set to outside positioning gives the tails this rounded, snubbed kind of look. They'd look a little more polished and finished if you made them a little larger to give the text breathing room, avoided tangents caused by the square bubbles sitting on panel borders and set the stroke's position to centre or inside.
Lack of a proper establishing shot makes it really hard to drink in the atmosphere or the situation the protagonist is in. The camera is always pulled right in on him, not really showing much of his situation, and because the shots are always pulled in so tight, when there are close-ups, they're robbed of impact, because they're barely any closer than the majority of the shots. I can't really get invested in the mystery of what's going on because I don't feel like I'm getting a really strong impression of where the protagonist is (it looks like a school, but it's full of dead adults and the main character also looks like an adult, but he doesn't seem confused by this?).
Sometimes the expressions of the main character don't really seem extreme enough for the awful situation he's in. He looks mostly a bit bewildered and surprised while waking up under a pile of corpses, getting told he's to blame by a dude in an extremely gory state, then seeing him die, and then witnessing somebody getting eaten by a dog. I don't feel as horrified as I probably should because the protagonist's expression and bodylanguage are more like he's in a weird scenario rather than an utterly horrifying one that'd probably cause most people to throw up or have a panic attack.
I felt like the colours were very bright and warm and generally sunny feeling for the tone of the bloody scene that was going down, and it robbed the scene of some impact. I understand that the scene is happening during the day, but some harsh contrast in the light and shadows, and less warm, soft colours would add a bit of weight and power to the story.
The blood feels very watery and thin because it's so pale and transparent, so it doesn't really evoke the horror of being covered in human blood because it looks fake, like watery red paint. The overuse of premade splatter brushes makes it hard to miss that they've been used. Maybe use them more in conjunction with other techniques, and try to get a bit more richness and depth to the blood.
Overall, it definitely has potential, it just feels a bit like it's trying to do horror while pulling punches on being horrifying. A little more atmosphere and intensity would really help sell the scenario and tone.
thank you for the kind words, and checking out my comic, once ive had some sleep i will come back with feedback for you, so far from what i saw the art looks great so looking forward to reading it.
Thank you very much for such a detailed review, I defiently agree with the speach bubbes and will give it a try, i was trying to make them unique and make sure that they could be read on mobile easily. But with your suitations i think i can make it work.
I actuelly already have up to Chapter 20 Drawn out, and there are a lot more establishing shots one everytime the scene changes or room changes , the 1st episode is kind of puporsely done this way, so you dont have a clue whats going on and later will find out.
With the experssion and everything and how he is not too shocked by the situation is also explained on in later episodes, the series will go between past and future events and the main charecter starts to become more emtinal due to a friend in the series.
The colors i also agree, orginally it was ment to be a horror story with intense scenes and builds up, but this later changed to more of an action story. Honestly this changed due to when this was being published by another website they wanted everything PG.
Again thank you so much, the feedback is great, and i will take on boared defiently with the establishing shots and speech bubles.
I left a short review in the comments for you, but I think the most important review comment is that I subscribed. You’re off to a FANTASTIC start. I love mystery and I love a bit of horror and it is just the right level of gore where I didn’t keel over. I have questions, so I hope you have answers!!!
Keep it up!
All I can say of that... I Subscribe it!!!
I read it as I listen to this one, that feels the picture more alive.
That was some pictures he shirt was white 
Please come and read my Prologue of The Catmen Sorceress1 instead for ink... but you also welcome to ink 500 and be in the lottery
Hi thank you for cheking out my comic, i saw your series as well i love the panelling in it makes it very intresting, i also sent you some ink for taking your time to read my series
I like it so far! The art is good and consistent. It's a really interesting hook to start a comic with. My only thing is that there is a fine line between comedy and horror, and so it would help a great deal to swing more horror if the color scheme wasn't so friendly? Unless you want it to be on that fine line as a dark humor. Personally, I enjoy that type of humor, but if that wasn't what you were going for, the timing might desire more establishing shots to build up to the horror reveals to make them more scary.
And you don't have to drop me any ink, ps, mines not unlocked yet
