I think it has a very interesting premise. I would definitely like to know more about the world, its system, and its characters.
The first chapter had enough information to intrigue me, but not enough to immerse me into the story. I think the world building is too sparse, it feels more like a summary of events. It would be nice to see more details, like what Viola is feeling as she flees from the king, the king and his court's reaction to her escape, the scenery of Vilepine and Goldlost, etc.