Thanks for the feedback and review! This next chapter is going to straight up be completely about world-building, action, and the politics behind them.
As for your comic I genuinely like the near satrical take on the subject matter and embodying the lens of how modern masculinity is warped and askew and makes so many people feel lost. Honestly did feel kind of ironic to read a story about that subject after constructing a love story between a tall wrestler type and an elf girl
Same as you said about my story I feel that we are just starting to get to the meat of the story, and I will certainly be reading!
As far the art its flowing and easy to decipher whats going on. I do feel like you are still getting a handle on the framing and line smoothing, but there is some nice shading and consistent backgrounds are always appreciated.
Looking forward to sharing our stories progression with you!