@BreeBree I read it, I am read the description, but the story in the comic is a bit hard to follow. Try to compact it a bit might help. Also in term of drawing for humans try to not make the elbows so sharp, maybe a bit of a curve. Keep it at it!
@missieanthony I see this is a return, glad you are back since some of your early comic were rather funny. I am not sure the thumbnail banner included here is the best. It looks like a city giving a different idea of what it might be. Maybe used some of the art from your actual comic or something.