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Jul 2014
1 month later

Wow, I see a lot of artistic growth in these old vs newer pages. Very cool!

Old:

Newer:

There's about a year time frame between the two pages, also my husband, Hobz, and I changed up our style between the two issues. In the older page, Hobz did most of the artwork for the book and in the newer page I drew all the characters and he handled all the background artwork. Oops Comic Adventure

The first pages I did of comics EVAR, were way back in middle school, and thankfully I don't have any of those, or at least not digitally. So instead the first page of webcomic, which is a good...four years old. So cringeworthy.


And now the page from yesterday:

1 month later
8 days later

Wow! your coloring and layouts have grown so much. I really like the way you did the shading and backgrounds in your newest page. smile

When I made a print version for my webcomic, I re-drew the first chapter.

The difference is pretty big !

BEFORE

AFTER :

This thread is amazing! One of my favorite things to do is compare the most recent page to the first page of a new comic I find. There's soooo much improvement in all your pages, it's really encouraging!

Page 1 of my comic, Magical Girl1:

And the most recent one, page 24:

I've only been working on my comic for five months, but I still think there's a fairly big difference, especially in paneling/composition! It's really exciting to think about how it will look in the future!

@kristintipping7: I love black and white comics and I DOUBLY love them when there is a splash of color in them. I checked your profile but didn't see a link to your comic; would you mind linking it here so I could subscribe? Your style is wonderful!

@kristintipping7 I'd love to see more too, it looks awesome^^

So, uhm, the oldest page I could find is a rough I did when I was 13. It's so awful it's hilarious, showing all symptoms of "I've so many things to tell I'll put eveything in the same page" (and I drew dozens of such pages).

Now I'm 26. This isn't the latest page I've done but still my favorite.

I think I improved in 13 years. In a slightly different style there's also this:

You drew really well when you were 13 (compared to me at least ^^)!

I love the page you choose ! Such dynamism! I admire artists who mix words and drawings !

Wow, that's an impressing and motivating topic !
@noxfox, you did a real improvement ! I love the colors of your favourite page. It tells a lot.

I've made a print version of my book, and I thought the prologue was really important to redo. So here's the old and the new version of the second page. I changed the discontinuity of the story and the designs too :
Before (2012)

After (2014)

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