Wow, your artwork is incredible. However, like my previous client, you NEED to give your comic water!
Let me explain. Your comic is like a plant. It needs soil, water, and sunlight to grow.
Right now, your comic is like a new born plant. You have given it a good foundation(plot) in which you are building on. You have made it as fun as possible. Now, here's my question. Why settle for less, when you can have more?
GIVE it WATER! Black and white comics maybe fun for the first few chapters. However, after a while, the engagement span of all your readers decrease because the life of your comic will be dying slowly.
Color can be used in many different ways; to give off an emotion or feeling of a setting. Describe, or even convey a certain idea to someone. Or to beautify, and realize a dream or goal.
We can see your comic, but can we realize it? What is it telling us? Is it aesthetically pleasing to the eyes? All these things must also be taken into consideration when drawing a comic.
Please note, I'm not here to make you feel bad. I'm giving my honest opinion as promised. As long as you review other peoples work, like, and sub to it. If not, I wouldn't review it again in the future. Don't worry, I have a tab in it.
I only want you to succeed. I want to be able to sleep knowing that I helped someone without expecting any returns in the future. This way, I can build a large network of people who will help one another and be successful together.
All the best,