If your still taking requests here's my latest chapter. I'm new to all this so ANY feedback would be welcome. Be warned I write weird. Thank you for offering to do this!
Hey, hey! Of course I'm always open to feedback! I have your work saved to continue reading, I'll add critiques as I go
I thought it was pretty hooky Left you one for now, will keep going with feedback if you'd like
Thank you so much!! If I find time to re-write this thing I'll defiantly re-balance some of the dialogue. We need more reviewers like you.
Mine is an illustrated Light Novel. Hopefully, it still fits. You can just critique the writing, ignore the art if you like lol
Hi Are short stories allowed as well?
I would love to get feedback on my work! I'm very open to any criticism and if there's anything I should edit in my work, I'll do the best I can. Thanks for the opportunity btw!
Thank you so much!!! Your feedback was great, thank you! And ooo yes please to more feedback if you feel like it! It's so helpful! I got so excited in this reply, so many exclamation points But, yes please to all the feedback (if you want/have time)
thanks for this supporting idea, here's my novel, you can choose any episode you like.
I've only got one chapter up so far but I'd love to know what you think of it. I'm going to try to get the next two up within the week.
I just want a critique on the prologue or the first chapter. Thank you.
wanna a critique to improve.
Thank you
I'd love a critique for my first chapter/ep of The Small Town Horror. I'd mainly love to know how it works as an opening.Thank you.
Sure. First or latest chapter, either one.
I don't have many chapters out yet, but would love some feedback!
Short chapters, a fast read.
Hey. I'm a newbie here and just posted my first episode. I would love to hear what you think about it.
I'll check out your novel as well.
i love getting critique, First chapter or even the latest chapter. Judge it for yourself. Next chapter is coming out soon. And i hope it's a series you'l enjoy.
Hello! Thanks for the thread and it'll be really helpful if u can check out my work and tell me where I've been going wrong:
Thanks in advance!