Post a Piece of Romantic Dialogue/Narration that You're proud of!

[ratscout]

Hi all! Romantic dialogue is hard to write! If you're proud of some romantic/licentious/lustful dialogue you wrote in your story, post it here and feel free to leave a link to your story!

Here's mine!

He couldn’t deny that he still wanted Pollyanna physically far more than he wanted Maruka. She was maddening, and he had a feeling she would always be his poison.

Inheritance | Tapas

[Leverance]

I've a BL Romance Fanfiction, it's a small preview of chapter 3.

Christian shook his head, copper-colored locks falling in front of his face. Gray eyes bored into him, making Tyrell move in his chair subconsciously. "I want you."

His Obsession | Tapas

[phoenixrenaissance]

I think I would have to define this part as lustful specifically.

Tab was doubled over by the bed, clutching at his foot. Fully clothed, what a shame. His hair was still damp, falling loose and wild around his face. A tear glistened brightly in one of his eyes.

...

Damn, I wish I could keep a picture of that.

Black Mantis | Tapas

[k5rakitan]

I'm personally most proud of Chapter 17:

Summary

Seto couldn't lose her. He didn't know where yet, but after seeing that job title, he was certain he could find a position for her. "Come work for Kaiba Corp."

"Fuck no. I hate big offices."

Her resolve shocked him. Nobody had ever turned down a position at Kaiba Corp. without a better offer from a rival company such as Industrial Illusions. "Name your salary," he said, not ready to believe it.

"I said no. I work from home and I like calling my own shots. If, and that's if, I lose my editing job, I'd much rather freelance than have to deal with bitches around the water cooler."

Seto thought fast. "It won't be like that. You'll be in my office, with a private water cooler."

She'd already been through this with her husband Michael before they'd moved their desks to separate rooms. The dynamic between them caused too much distraction. "Nice try. We'll get sick of each other within a month that way. Even if we don't, just wait until your secretary gets jealous and poisons my coffee. Besides, I'm sure as hell not leaving Marc and Michael behind."

They stared at each other, arms crossed, at an impasse. If only Seto could make Joan forget about everything that tied her to this place.

Seto grabbed Joan and kissed her. Joan let it happen. He had paid for her time today. He could use it how he wanted. He could believe what he wanted to believe about her as long as it didn't affect her time off the clock.

Joan felt an ache throbbing through the kiss. Seto couldn't accept her false surrender. Nothing had been settled.

Seto broke the kiss but held on to the back of her head. Their foreheads touching, he spoke low so only she could hear. "Whore, I need you."

Goosebumps shot down Joan's arms. Seto needed the real her, not the one that bent to his demands. As long as Seto got what he needed, she could have what she wanted. "OK, but you've got to cut this possessive shit."

Possessive shit. Seto had said the same thing to a whore in Japan not too long ago. Shame crept into his features.

Joan continued, "If you fly me to Japan two nights a week, I won't need to seek new clients, but you still have to accept everyone I'm already with. Michael. Marc. Mokuba. Take it or leave it."

Kaiba's Prostitute | Tapas

[sarahmassey998]

"There are no inherently evil or good men only the choices they make and the consequences that follow. Choose what you will, I cannot be the judge of them nor do I wish to be. Know that I will stand with you as you are and what you will be. It may not be the wisest of decisions or one that will prevent me pain later but that is my choice.”
When a reanimated corpse tries to confess his love to mad writer. Neither of them has game.

Prometheus Reanimated | Tapas

[ivanskilling]

Love exiled me long ago but I know no other desolation than when I left you once again.

Twice, I chose to leave you. Twice, I broke your heart.

In the next life, please break mine instead.

Still one of my favorite romantic quotes from Shackles!

Shackles | Tapas

[CodeMonkeyArts]

Tristan obliged, his eyes back to their calm waters, his head lowering so she can caress his cheek, "I hope to not screw it up."

"Oh, as long you're mine, you won't." She bit her lip, unable to help that possessive streak, "I'll try not to do the same. I may suck at it, though."

"Humility from my fiery queen, huh?" He chuckled, lowering his head further to kiss her forehead, "We're human; screwing things up comes with the territory."

Human.

He saw her as human.

Not a monster.

Really liked this scene since it shows a bit of realistic vulnerability from Ira as well as why Tristan means so much to her. Such a sweet scene sniffles god everything went so downhill...

Birth of a Sin | Tapas

[TheOne]

This piece is from my Action/Fantasy story titled A Ray of Hope.

Embarrassed by the fact they was alone together, the two of them sat there silently. After a few minutes of tense silence, Hinan finally manages to express her feelings.

Hinan: "Do you remember that time when we first met? When you had kissed me on the cheek? At first I was confused as to why you did that. But then you told me that it was the activation requirement for your ability. I was relieved when you said that, but at the same time, deep down I was a little upset because it wasn't for what I was thinking."

Hinan: "Every time I see you, I can't help but to remember that kiss. And everyday, I hoped that you would kiss me like that again. Even if it was just once. So after hearing how I feel, I was wondering if you could kiss me like before. But even if you don't feel the same way I do, can we at least still be friends? Just being around you is-

Before she could finish, Kakusan leaned in and kissed her. But this time it wasn't on the cheek. After about five seconds, Kakusan eases off of her.

Kakusan: "I convinced myself that if I told you how I feel, you would reject me. Because of this, I chose to bite my lip and keep quiet. I was so scared of rejection, I thought that I would I die before I told you how I feel. Time and time again, you demonstrated just how amazing you truly are. And hearing you say these words just made me the happiest girl in the world."

This time Hinan initiates the kiss. After a solid minute, Kakusan pins Hinan to the bed and sits on top of her. Crying tears of joy, Kakusan asks her one simple question.

Kakusan: "Will you be my first?"

Hinan: "Only if you'll be mine."

After sharing one more kiss, the two of them spent the rest of the night together.

[KhanSpring]

"If the two of us are... If two suns rise in sky it will all burn. If there are two moons above, our nights will be bright, but we will forget warmth. There must be one sun and moon. If you are the sun, and I the moon, I would make it through, but ask yourself if you could, if the roles were reverse. Could we be two suns, two moons and sun and moon? Let's try!"

[MerrowBros]

"Maeve and I have been dating for nine years! I was gonna propose to her eleven years from now!"

• Darrel

That's the most romantic bit of dialogue I was able to find in my comic. I guess I don't have a romantic bone in my body. : )

[DogshitJay]

Looooove romance! Here's an excerpt from the big makeout scene in the latest chapter of my story:

Stephen drained his glass and put it casually on the floor beside his feet. His movements were relaxed and unhurried. Building tension buzzed through Inho, and he wondered if he was the only one feeling it. His stomach seemed too high up in his body, and though he was warm, a cold thrill tingled in his fingers.

When Stephen put his hand on Inho’s thigh, Inho didn’t jump. He just looked at it, helpless to the intimacy of the touch.

Here's my LGBTQ+ Novel!

Kiss It Better | Tapas