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May 2020

One more bad action pose for the God of bad action poses. But I'm too tired of redoing it to redo it more... :sip:
But maybe there are any suggestions of doing some final little fix, which could be done in a couple of minutes before polishing it? :thinking: Even if it'll not make it super-good, but just a bit better :sip: Not big fix. Too tired for big fixes. :no_good:

It looks like they're trying to push the other person (I'm assuming there's another person) but it's not conveying enough force.
It's kind of a common issue when people draw action poses, they don't properly convey force.

In order to push someone, unless they don't weigh much or the pusher is quite strong, you need to put your weight into it, simply bending the back so they're leaning into the push might help.
Unless I'm totally misreading the movement due to the lack of anything else on the page, then I might be able to provide different advice.

Right!

Yes... I struggle a lot with it.

So you suggest to just tilt her torso more? :thinking: I'll try

She needs to lean into the push more.

Bend the front knee, position the back knee so she seems to be bracing herself and have her lean into the push.
If you need a bit of help visualizing, I know I'm not always the best at conveying my thoughts through words, try getting up and leaning on your hands against your wall, as though you were pushing it.

You'll notice that your knees are bent to brace yourself and you're leaning into the push.

Does that make sense?

No problem, I'll try to help out if it still doesn't come out right.
Action is kind of my whole thing, so I'm always happy to help someone figure out action scenes, written or drawn.

Tsuchinoko, f#ck yeah!

They're adorable, you perfectly captured the beauty and cuteness of the chonky snek.