Wacky outlandish charm perfectly describes that one story that Iâm not making yet (Star Hunters). As a matter of fact, The Spider Queen is a character in it. Not a main one, but she does help the main characters a little. She also has a history with the main antagonist đŤ˘
Her guns shoot webs (cause thatâs cool)
@ArtGremlin OMGGGG she looks so cool, I very much love her design already I want to know more about this story?? Youâre gonna have to drop some more deets somewhere in the forums Iâm so curious Also I guess sheâs like Lady Lock in not just aesthetics then
I wonât spoil too much though
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Since itâs gonna be a while before I make it I can give you the basic plot rundown without worrying about spoilers much.
So thereâs this guy. Well, boy actually. Heâs 14. Anyway, he was born with really bad luck. It often gets him hurt, but it canât kill him. But apparently it can kill other people, because one day something happens to him that causes his entire village to burn down and everyone but him dies
After a while of sitting alone and crying, he sees a white van pull up near the outskirts of the village. A man with a carrot patterned suit gets out and starts walking around and looking for something. The man sees him and asks him some weird questions like âdid you see anything fall from the sky?â And âhave you seen a glowing baby âround here?â The boy (his name is Felix) starts crying again and blathers about everything is his fault. So the carrot guy is all like, âCome with me.â And drives off with him in his white van
Carrot guy takes him to this place with a lot of other people in funky patterned suits and Felix eventually ends up with some mad scientist looking guys who always talk just too quietly to hear behind his back, and ask him random questions. He stays in this place for a while, and finds that itâs known as âThe Agency.â
One day the scientists hand him a baby. (They arenât very responsible human beings) He asks whose baby it is, and they literally just say âYoursâ (They cloned him) The scientists tell him that being near the baby will negate his bad luck because they reverse engineered his dna to make the baby lucky. Felix accepts this, and tries to find some parenting manuals.
(The scientistsâ evil plot) Make a super-lucky super Agent, make his 14 year old âfatherâ take care of the baby because they donât want to, then âdisposeâ of him when the lucky kid is old enough to work for them.
The agency recruits Felix and his son and gives them suits and code names. (Felix is also hypnotized to forget his og name, so Iâll just call him by his agent name now) Felix becomes Agent Flower and has a flower suit, and they give his baby a little lime patterned onesie and is known as Agent Lime.
okay this whole spiel doesnât really belong in this thread, but I doubt anyone cares enough to stop me so-
The main plot of the story the story is 10 years later and they still work with the agency. Their job is basically to go to places that have received a large amount of destruction in a short period of time and look for fallen stars. The stars take the forms of babies when they reach the earth.
Lime and Flower are sent to investigate a massive crater that is suspected to be star-made, but they didnât find a baby in it. The only living creature near is a sleeping, bald, teenager with exotic looking armor just outside the crater. They wake him up and his head lights on fire. Since he has fire hair, they suspect that he could be the star that fell, so they question him. They find out that 1. He is an imbecile 2. He doesnât remember anything before waking up in the crater 3. Despite having just begun his existence, he knows a lot of random stuff (like knowing how to speak, etcâŚ)
They decide that despite looking much older than most fallen stars, thereâs literally nothing else he could be. (He tells them his name is Rigel too) They attempt to take him too the Agency, but he sets their van on fire with his hair, so they have to walk the whole way there. most of the story is them walking about trying to not die to giant plants and what not.
Thatâs all Iâll say for now. I sure said a lot
@ArtGremlin Iâm just seeing this right now but that is WILD and I am hooked!!! But it looks like Iâm gonna have to wait a while to filling get my backstage passes to see how this story pans out lol. I love how chaotic it is, and I do recall Agent Flower and Lime in early concept arts so now I know their backstory >:0 Poor kid is half banana, I mean what else were the scientists gonna use to clone Agent Flower.
Also Rigel is just vibing and doesnât know whatâs going on and you know what? sometimes⌠same. I just donât have fire hair Iâm glad I donât spontaneously combust cars lol
Iâm getting close to finishing redoing the 3rd page of my second comic âthe city of outcastsâ (Iâm planning on changing the name when I start reuploading) BUT ITâS SO CLEAN COMPARED TO THE OG-
This time Iâll have better idea of what Iâm doing haha. I think Iâve learned my lesson, plan ahead more. First with August, then this one, Iâve had to redo the beginning so it doesnât hurt me in the long run. I think whenever I make my next comic Iâll be more careful
This could be the final product, but Iâm not sure. Weâll see if I change anything once Iâm ready to start uploading again.
I feel really proud of those gold letters because I genuinely had no idea what I was doing when I rendered them.
My sister said, âItâs giving The Great Gatsbyâ (because of the eyes) Accidentally gave him Edgarâs scarf from brawl stars lol
Hey! I just started posting my comics here:
Vyun, Kosmeya and a Witch's Curse1
I'd like to show you some work in progress!
First of all, I started with designs, script and storyboards:
After that there were sketches and line:
Then I added some color for the characters:
And finally the render. As a result, the pages look like this: