@rosiegh0st's Mirror Monster:
- I like how expressive you draw the characters; their faces and bodies really convey their expressions really well, and I’m enjoying it.
- Speaking of expressiveness, the characters all have a lot of personality and stand apart from each other really well; it’s also fun to watch them interact because of all that personality bouncing off each other.
- I like the progression of the plot, especially at the beginning, and how it really gives agency to Josie in progressing the plot on her own, rather than plot just happening to her.
- For the newest chapter, I feel like it slows down a bit towards the middle, which I think is a fine little break from all the excitement since it doesn’t feel unnecessary at all while also still moving the plot along.
Overall, I think you have a solid story going on so far with interesting and rich characters that really round everything out! If you like characters with a lot of personality that play off each other with a curious mystery going on, then I would recommend reading this comic!
@azzy-m’s The Stars Above Us:
- I like the characters so far and how you hint at little things going on in their personal lives or their pasts to stir up some intrigue beyond how they are in the present. Definitely looking forward to how those characters develop more!
- The diversity in the cast is nice and feels completely natural, so kudos to you!
- Be careful with your speech bubbles; some of them are totally fine, but with some others, the text can feel a little too cramped within the bubble, or actually spills out just a tiny bit. I also noticed a couple of tangents in the edges of the speech bubbles, so that’s something to watch for and avoid going forward.
- Because the story is categorized as a romance, I will say that it doesn’t feel much like a romance yet; it feels like a good slice-of-life, but if you’re marketing towards people who are interested in romance, then I think it might be something to consider bringing to the forefront a little more. This is up to you, though, and depends on what you’re going for here!
All in all, I like where the story is going so far and am interested to see how things will further develop for these characters. Not only that, but with what we know about the characters so far, it will be engaging to see not only where they end up, but also other details about their backgrounds and those personal experiences that have shaped them thus far.
Keep up the great work, and thanks for letting me take a look at your comics! You're doing wonderfully!