Promote here to get critiqued on your writing and how to make it more engaging

NeuHorizon 2024-04-03 07:24:53 UTC #1

ill start, i'm Working for my first 25 subs and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel.
Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much.

In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team on a mission to uncover the truth behind a vanished colony. But as they breach the eerie silence of the deserted outpost, they stumble upon a colossal artifact beyond their wildest imagination.

Suddenly, they find themselves ripped from the red sands of Mars and hurled into the unknown world full of wonders, magic, and horrors beyond their wildest imaginations

sams_cartoon_shack 2024-04-03 07:36:52 UTC #2

I'll plug in my comic strip The Shapes for feedback too!

heyerimv 2024-04-03 09:45:30 UTC #3

A new update from my webnovel. If you are into Fantasy/Romance genre (manhwa-ish style), I hope you can check out my story! ^^ Let me know what you think also by commenting your thoughts on my work. Don't forget to also subscribe to my work~ I'm aiming to reach 100 subs. Thank you so much for the support!

Novel Link:

Latest Chapter:

MK_Wizard 2024-04-03 13:29:17 UTC #4

Any and every criticism helps. Don't hold back, friend.

Vayvaction 2024-04-03 13:40:36 UTC #5

'Keep your friends close but keep your enemies closer'

I wonder if Vincent saw me as a friend or as an enemy?

What happens when Riona, an Elven princess, gets betrayed by her best friend, Vincent who she has been friends with for more than decade?

And of course it is no ordinary betrayal when Riona loses her best friend Vincent, her kingdom and Audrey, her maiden who was like a sister to her...

Now seeking revenge instead of making a deal with the devil she makes a deal with the northern duke...

revenge/slow burn romance/ tragedy/ historical
updates weekly or bi-weekly

Please be as harsh as you like!

Rodrigo_Silveira 2024-04-03 15:59:22 UTC #6

This Wednesday, it's the day to discover what Monica can really do:

Synopsis:

Not always a Red Way, but always the Red Way! At just 16, Tyler Red Way must grapple with the responsibility of maturing and becoming the leader of the most powerful mage family: The Scarlet Arcanist. Alongside his brother Hyan and friends Jake and Amelia, they embark on a challenging journey of growth where allies and enemies are never certain!!

TMark_Art 2024-04-03 22:24:08 UTC #7

Would love to see your thoughts in the comments. Thanks for checking it out!!!!

miyaskya 2024-04-04 02:28:22 UTC #8

Here's my fantasy story. Any feedback would be appreciated!

heyerimv 2024-04-04 08:56:53 UTC #9

I just updated my webnovel! It's about a girl who went to another world every time she falls asleep at night yet one night, she got stuck in that world and if she won't be back before her six month mark, she will die there. There she got stumbled on a prince who's disguising himself as a mercenary and they formed a connection. If you want to know more about what happened to them, especially the girl, I hope you can check it out!

This is a Fantasy/Romance type and if you're into some sort of manhwa-ish story, you should give this a try!

Latest Chapter:

Novel Link: