I'll be completely honest and tell you what I liked and what I did not, as I think this is the most useful I can be as a reader.
- the characters are adorable!
- the expressions and movements are expressive enough, which I find difficult to do with character designs with undetailed faces
However, I'm not sure about the plot. At this point, I don't know if I would read a story focused on such a simple plot, but I don't know what you have in stock for the future, so I could change my mind
Here is my comic: