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Aug 2020

Hello I was wondering if you could give feedback on our prologue​:grin:.Only if you are okay with it

I would love to. The thread calls for a sentence of feedback on someone else's work before posting your own though, so I don't want to ignore @DiscountedArtist 's rules. Maybe leave some feedback first?

Its really pissing me off that many of the users posting in this thread are ignoring those rules.

Its okay to flag people for being off topic. Its how community members can keep others from spamming self promotion. I like to give a chance for people to correct themselves first, but don't be afraid to hit that flag icon if its something you see often.

Its perfectly fine. Everyone is new once. Just be sure to read the rules when posting to a thread.

I read ur episodes till the one called "English", I won't lie but none of them made me laugh,
So for me I think u should improve comedy and face expressions, but the artstyle is cool I have no problem with it
but what attracted me is that episode " English "

So I just wanna know, were you making fun of arabic because the character said
(تحدثوا مثل هاذا )
Which literally means ( they spoke like that )

I hope you explain ur point because I didn't get

And here's my novel

● Name: Age of Magic

● Genre: Fantasy, Action, Mystery, Magic

● Summary:
500 years ago, people believed that a great earthquake divided a huge continent into three ones . These three lived in peace until the day when a village got destroyed leaving one survivor. A boy named Leo, but little did he know of the adventure that awaited him.

● Why should you read it ?
Hmmm, If you like elves and demons or dragons, it's gonna be here, if you wanna see the journey of boy who lost everything and wants to get stronger in order to get his revenge, it's also gonna be here, if you like magical stuff, and how it works ( There're available episodes that explain magic how it works " The origin of magic " check them out if you wanna know how, and let me know ur opinion about it )

● Hopefully you check it out

There you go!

Also- I have questions. Why is this a webtoon link? Why... like.... I don't want to spoil the prologue but why? Lol. To create more of an impact though, I would make it longer. It read very quickly.

Okay will do thanks so much!!! And I still need to update it in tapas 😅

Whatever happened to giving me a warm welcome a few days ago? Also I DID read a comic from my FRIEND, Discounted Artists, and his COMICAL series, DISCOUNTED Comics.
(Edit: And once again, it WAS funny)

You were supposed to put a sentence about it in the comment with the link, I read it too and I still did it.

To write an paragraph about my long experience Ocean was a good pun (already read it). Weight loss had a great punchline and expressions (already read it). Question was a new art style, and pretty sad to see blue dude go in corner (already read). However, I didn't get the speeding ticket (already read). Attitude was freaking hilarious, also it had a good-looking cake art style . 凸( •̀_•́ )凸

I said sentence not paragraph, there are six sentences in a paragraph. (And I'm sorry about being rude earlier, I'm still mad at you for something admittedly petty on my end for a few days)

YOLO SWAG 凸( •̀•́ )凸 凸( •̀•́ )凸 凸( •̀_•́ )凸... Don't know...

I wasn't making fun of Arabic. I searched up languages made before English and Arabic was one of them. I put "they spoke like this" int ogoogle translate and put it in the comic, because the joke was supposed to be that the MC somehow knew Arabic. At least, I think that was what I was going for, I made it last month.

Also, thanks for the feedback. Now that I think about it, improving my facial expression would be great because a lot of the comics have reactions in them.

Aah I got ur point, I just want to tell you that you wrote arabic from the other side like English alphabets, but arabic is written from the right to left, and it's written with fusion letters not separated ones just I wrote up there in the reply .
just a piece of information .
And I think I'll keep on reading ur work because I find it cool :smiley: and thanks

Y2F