Read for Read (again)

[DiscountedArtist]

I made a read for read thread a while ago, and since then I've seen some new accounts. So I'm making another one. I like these better than sub4sub because this way the people who sub to your work actually enjoy it.

Here's a rule:
You need to read some of someone else's work and write at least one sentence about it (in this thread) before posting your own work. It doesn't need to be positive, but don't be straight out mean

Here's my comic. The genre is comedy

Discounted Comics | Tapas

[CommanderMarty]

I've already read a bit of your comic but I'll a bit more of it real quick. (Alright I caught up all the things I said last time still apply except you are getting better at the comedy)

Anyways I'll post my novel in here.

Summary: Jervis T Booker is one of the heroes who defeated the Orc king, and he is looking for his lost daughter, he must find Nash, the man that is taking care of his daughter, along the journey Jervis will make many friends and enemies.

Genre: Action, Fantasy, Drama

Jervis T Booker | Tapas

This is a character that was introduced in most recent chapter.

[CommanderMarty]

(bumping this up) (fuck you character limit)

[DiscountedArtist]

Awww, thanks (fuck you character limit)

[cherrystark]

@CommanderMarty I think you have a really interested premise for a story. Good job. I did have a hard time grasping the flow of the story since the story wasn't in the standard paragraph format and there weren't tons of sensory details. That being said, we have different writing styles and if you like how it's done. That's cool too.

Here is my story.

The Museum | Tapas

[CommanderMarty]

You mean the pacing when you said the flow? And I do need to improve on the details for sure. Thank you for the feedback.

[cherrystark]

Yeah, I did. I'm happy to help where and if I can.

[ItsAvocadoToast]

Another one! Comedy/Slice of Life series, Avocados And Guacamole (I know you read it, I wanted the comments to read it.) HEY PEOPLE IN COMMENTS! READ IT PLEASE!
https://tapas.io/series/Avocados-And-Guacamole

[Kiweevil]

I like the idea of a read for read thread significantly better than a sub for sub thread. Sub for sub just creates dead subs which hurt your series. Many creators here dislike sub for sub.

[shrikha56]

Hello guys.I am the writer of a webtoon called peek a boo and we recently came out with our prologue.Pls do check it out

PEEK - A - BOO

[MoseyP]

@DiscountedArtist finally got around to reading your comic! I like your humour style so far, it kind of reminds me of cyanide and happiness. I like the simplicity of it as well.

Here is my sci-fi novel, Vehementia -

Vehementia | Tapas

[CommanderMarty]

You didn't even read a single thing in this asshole. (sorry just had to add that in to vent my frustrations with you)

[alexlcuri07]

@DiscountedArtist Maybe its worth telling people to leave feedback for the person above them?

@cherrystark I've been trying to get to your story for a minute so I'll give feedback on it here. Definitely a strong start with a great hook, but I'm sure you knew that. I love the magical/fantastical way that you describe technology (very Artemis Foul)

Here's Lacuna, should anyone be interested~

Lacuna: A Nexus Troupe Novel | Tapas

[shrikha56]

Hello I was wondering if you could give feedback on our prologue​.Only if you are okay with it

PEEK - A - BOO

[alexlcuri07]

I would love to. The thread calls for a sentence of feedback on someone else's work before posting your own though, so I don't want to ignore @DiscountedArtist 's rules. Maybe leave some feedback first?

[CommanderMarty]

Its really pissing me off that many of the users posting in this thread are ignoring those rules.

[CommanderMarty]

Maybe you should read the title of the thread and read the first post of it.

[alexlcuri07]

Its okay to flag people for being off topic. Its how community members can keep others from spamming self promotion. I like to give a chance for people to correct themselves first, but don't be afraid to hit that flag icon if its something you see often.

[shrikha56]

Sure!!! Sorry about that

[alexlcuri07]

Its perfectly fine. Everyone is new once. Just be sure to read the rules when posting to a thread.