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Aug 2020

I made a read for read thread a while ago, and since then I've seen some new accounts. So I'm making another one. I like these better than sub4sub because this way the people who sub to your work actually enjoy it.

Here's a rule:
You need to read some of someone else's work and write at least one sentence about it (in this thread) before posting your own work. It doesn't need to be positive, but don't be straight out mean

Here's my comic. The genre is comedy

I've already read a bit of your comic but I'll a bit more of it real quick. (Alright I caught up all the things I said last time still apply except you are getting better at the comedy)

Anyways I'll post my novel in here.

Summary: Jervis T Booker is one of the heroes who defeated the Orc king, and he is looking for his lost daughter, he must find Nash, the man that is taking care of his daughter, along the journey Jervis will make many friends and enemies.

Genre: Action, Fantasy, Drama

This is a character that was introduced in most recent chapter.

@CommanderMarty I think you have a really interested premise for a story. Good job. I did have a hard time grasping the flow of the story since the story wasn't in the standard paragraph format and there weren't tons of sensory details. That being said, we have different writing styles and if you like how it's done. That's cool too.

Here is my story.

You mean the pacing when you said the flow? And I do need to improve on the details for sure. Thank you for the feedback.

I like the idea of a read for read thread significantly better than a sub for sub thread. Sub for sub just creates dead subs which hurt your series. Many creators here dislike sub for sub.

Hello guys.I am the writer of a webtoon called peek a boo and we recently came out with our prologue.Pls do check it out :grin::grin::grin:

@DiscountedArtist finally got around to reading your comic! I like your humour style so far, it kind of reminds me of cyanide and happiness. I like the simplicity of it as well.

Here is my sci-fi novel, Vehementia -

@DiscountedArtist Maybe its worth telling people to leave feedback for the person above them?

@cherrystark I've been trying to get to your story for a minute so I'll give feedback on it here. Definitely a strong start with a great hook, but I'm sure you knew that. I love the magical/fantastical way that you describe technology (very Artemis Foul)

Here's Lacuna, should anyone be interested~

Hello I was wondering if you could give feedback on our prologue​:grin:.Only if you are okay with it

I would love to. The thread calls for a sentence of feedback on someone else's work before posting your own though, so I don't want to ignore @DiscountedArtist 's rules. Maybe leave some feedback first?

Its really pissing me off that many of the users posting in this thread are ignoring those rules.

Its okay to flag people for being off topic. Its how community members can keep others from spamming self promotion. I like to give a chance for people to correct themselves first, but don't be afraid to hit that flag icon if its something you see often.

Its perfectly fine. Everyone is new once. Just be sure to read the rules when posting to a thread.

I read ur episodes till the one called "English", I won't lie but none of them made me laugh,
So for me I think u should improve comedy and face expressions, but the artstyle is cool I have no problem with it
but what attracted me is that episode " English "

So I just wanna know, were you making fun of arabic because the character said
(تحدثوا مثل هاذا )
Which literally means ( they spoke like that )

I hope you explain ur point because I didn't get

And here's my novel

● Name: Age of Magic

● Genre: Fantasy, Action, Mystery, Magic

● Summary:
500 years ago, people believed that a great earthquake divided a huge continent into three ones . These three lived in peace until the day when a village got destroyed leaving one survivor. A boy named Leo, but little did he know of the adventure that awaited him.

● Why should you read it ?
Hmmm, If you like elves and demons or dragons, it's gonna be here, if you wanna see the journey of boy who lost everything and wants to get stronger in order to get his revenge, it's also gonna be here, if you like magical stuff, and how it works ( There're available episodes that explain magic how it works " The origin of magic " check them out if you wanna know how, and let me know ur opinion about it )

● Hopefully you check it out

There you go!

Also- I have questions. Why is this a webtoon link? Why... like.... I don't want to spoil the prologue but why? Lol. To create more of an impact though, I would make it longer. It read very quickly.

Okay will do thanks so much!!! And I still need to update it in tapas 😅

Whatever happened to giving me a warm welcome a few days ago? Also I DID read a comic from my FRIEND, Discounted Artists, and his COMICAL series, DISCOUNTED Comics.
(Edit: And once again, it WAS funny)

You were supposed to put a sentence about it in the comment with the link, I read it too and I still did it.

To write an paragraph about my long experience Ocean was a good pun (already read it). Weight loss had a great punchline and expressions (already read it). Question was a new art style, and pretty sad to see blue dude go in corner (already read). However, I didn't get the speeding ticket (already read). Attitude was freaking hilarious, also it had a good-looking cake art style . 凸( •̀_•́ )凸

I said sentence not paragraph, there are six sentences in a paragraph. (And I'm sorry about being rude earlier, I'm still mad at you for something admittedly petty on my end for a few days)

YOLO SWAG 凸( •̀•́ )凸 凸( •̀•́ )凸 凸( •̀_•́ )凸... Don't know...

I wasn't making fun of Arabic. I searched up languages made before English and Arabic was one of them. I put "they spoke like this" int ogoogle translate and put it in the comic, because the joke was supposed to be that the MC somehow knew Arabic. At least, I think that was what I was going for, I made it last month.

Also, thanks for the feedback. Now that I think about it, improving my facial expression would be great because a lot of the comics have reactions in them.

Aah I got ur point, I just want to tell you that you wrote arabic from the other side like English alphabets, but arabic is written from the right to left, and it's written with fusion letters not separated ones just I wrote up there in the reply .
just a piece of information .
And I think I'll keep on reading ur work because I find it cool :smiley: and thanks

Y2F

@youu2sef I like that the format is that of a play script, but I feel like the plot is too fantasy generic.
I am at the first few chapters, though so my opinion will most likely change as I read further on.

And this is my work:

I like the set up to give people a bias towards the character before the whole thing kicks off. Very typical murder mystery thing that always works for that genre.

It's called Wandering the World. Idk if this is just for comics or both, but it's up as both a novel and comic. The novel is way farther along. The comic only has like a page or 2 up, but I would love if you checked either out either way. :grin:
Novel Link:
https://tapas.io/series/Wandering-the-World

Comic Link:
https://tapas.io/series/Wandering-the-World-Comic-Book-Preview2

The year is 2028 it's been 9 years since the Great War that saw most of the world nuked. A world government has now been set up to prevent anymore wars. After a tragic event Stan is seeking revenge, but against who? Find out more about this crazy world with Stan and his two homies, Dariűse, and Quiet. Who have their own beefs with this crazy world they live in.
(Sorry for the way it's written this will eventually be a comic book. This is just the written out version.)

I really like how your painting the picture, I feel like I can visualize everything really well. Liking the character a lot so far as well!!

Just one thing, in the prologue I did notice in the sentence "He was told that he is tall for his age" you accidentally wrote "He was told that he is told for his age" Just wanted to let you know :slight_smile:

This one is mine. Slice of life/comedy about a Panda who moved to Canada to open his dream bar. Makes friends with a Moose, Beaver, and a cow and they go on adventures.