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@julipow Don't worry take your time. I'm super busy this week too, I will read yours soon I have free time. . :sob:
Yes, I would love feedback.

Aw thanks so much for the kind comments :two_hearts:
I'm really glad you've enjoyed it so far and just with the prologue which I've been meaning to expand on. I originally wrote it as a novel so I did have a bit more in the prologue that I cut for the sake of continuing into the story but developed the two of them more. I hope you like the rest of the story too​:blush:

@jcmraz So, I finally had time to have a look at your comic! :revolving_hearts: First of all, I really love your art style, it fits the comic so well and goes well with the story! I also love the whole concept of it, it's really interesting to start with action right away! I really enjoyed reading the episodes I was able to! :heart_03: Just a few things I noticed that might could be improved: The one page episodes for me personally are a bit too short, I know a lot of comic creators decide to only post one page per episode so they can keep a weekly update schedule but it for me it disrupts the story flow a lot and can hinder people from enjoying to binge read it. Of course, that could just be my personal preference so no worries! Everyone has different taste! :revolving_hearts: The other thing I noticed is that 50 pages aka almost 50 episodes for Chapter 0 so basically the prologue/introduction/start of the story is A LOT. I haven't seen any web/traditional published comic with such a long Chapter 0 and I think it would be beneficial if you cut it down a bit or split this long chapter into multiple chapters. But again, that could be just my personal preference. Either way, I really loved your comic and I am sure you are going to gain plenty more supporters for such an unique and amazing story! Keep up the good work, you are doing amazing! :revolving_hearts:

lol yeah I do the pages in part because I would only be able to upload like 2 or 3 times a year if I didn't XP but also because the dream is for print and I enjoy the page format more personally. Definitely different strokes though and I have done a short scrolling comic on webtoons once before :slight_smile: And yeahh I know haha I went way overboard on that and didnt realize until it was too late XD So I worked to finish that up and prepare for moving forward. I jumped in before I was ready to avoid getting stuck in revision hell lol Chapter 1 will be 14-17 pages long and I've got a much better control on pace than I did at the start. That's actually a thing I keep in mind at all times when writing moving passed chapter 0. The whole chapter 0 should have been condensed to maybe 20 pages. I agree entirely with you on that!

Thank you so much for reading and giving your thoughts! I hope you're right lol :slight_smile:

Also this is my comic, a story about the misadventures of Lucy the demon, who has recently become a punisher and must manage the souls of the damned and office life. While her boss, Lucius, has to somehow handle Lucy and get her to do her job right.

Sorry for the wait @julipow and @Tinkerton, but I will be completing my participation in the read for read this week and should have my reviews together by Sunday. :hype_01:

@julipow, HI there, just finished read your book. Really cool, I genuinely support the story to be made as a movie or cartoon. The character's seem fun. Sorry, took me this long, I just have the time to breath now. :grinning:

Hi there! I read a couple chapters of your novel and left you a comment. I would read more, but I don't have much free time for the next several days. What I did read I really enjoyed so I will return to read more when I can ^_^

Here is my passion project I have been trying to gain a following for while I work on the comic counterpart.
I love the psychological struggle that my MC goes through and the way his character develops throughout the series physically and mentally. And I also love the romantic relationship of him and his partner as it is going to be based heavily on trust and support.

Genre: romance, fantasy, drama. A slowburn with supernatural twists.

Oh my! Thank you so much, I am really happy to hear that! :blusht: And no worries, I am still reading through all the works here but I am slowly getting to yours! Thank you for supporting & enjoying "Essence of Life", I am really grateful for that! :revolving_hearts: Stay safe and have a great day!

Also, thank you so much! :blusht: :revolving_hearts: I am really happy to hear you enjoyed my book so far! No worries at all, you can take all the time you need to read more if you want to! As mentioned in the comment above, I will get to your work soon. :coffee_love:

Hello, here are my reviews for the read for read. I want to do my feedback differently though. I will give positive feedback for each comic or novel that I read even if I did not subscribe to show my support.

@julipow I liked your novel because the angels described well and their behavior makes each one a likable character. Furthermore, I found your story relatable because your characters act like humans even though they are beings of a higher power.

@Gramkrackerhan your comics presented realistic situations with a comedic twist. I also really liked your art style.

@Iridium I found Menmar to be a captivating storyline with great use of cultural myths and legends. Your art style was also beautiful with the scenery and people you created.

@Tinkerton your book had a great storyline with clever dialogue that made me want to read more.

Here is my comic for you all to read when you have the chance.

Thank you @julipow for your feedback on my comic and thank you @Tinkerton for all your support to my series.

Hello everyone. I will be honest here. If we new creators want to grow in this platform we have to help each other. So I propose we do this:
1. Read a minimum of a two chapters from each of our work
2. Leave a comment saying what we liked or not
3. If possible then sub to that work. I am a slow reader but will definitely read everyone's work (Those who replies) I will also sub back to those who sub to me
Thank you 3.0

@Utamee I finally had enough time to properly read both of your comics. First of all, I love both of these stories, the idea and premises is very interesting and leaves me curious to what happens next! There were a few spelling/grammar mistakes but it didn't change the reading experience for me! I think your art style fits the stories pretty well and I am sure you can improve more throughout the stories! Overall, I really enjoyed reading both comics! :revolving_hearts: I am sure you will be able to gain more support for your amazing work in the future. Keep up the good work! :coffee_love:

Hoii sounds like a good idea. Here is my novel.


Enjoy reading it!

mine

6 months later

So what I like in my novel the hate to love between Mr. Han and Mr.Su ehhehe

So heres my story
Title:Your Smile

Author: Neurel

Genre: yaoi, drama,romance, comedy
Description:
One morning before Su Baek-Yang left for work as always, his so-called neighbor/co-worker started to bother him. The handsome man seems to be itching to get on his nerves on a daily basis. Why won't this annoying mosquito leave him alone?!
Status: Ongoing
Link: https://tapas.io/series/Your-Smile/info