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Apr 2024

I'll give it a read and if you want, please give mine a read too

Hi, just read through all your available chapters. The pacing is good, I like how it switches POV, and I'm curious what will happen next. Looking forward to the next chapters!

I've seen you around here, but never had the chance to read your story. Now I need to go training so I'll subscribe and read the story later when I'll be home. I'll leave the link for mine in the meantime, whether you want to start reading or wait until I read yours first is fine by me.

I am loving this story! I've added it to my sub list and I'll be looking forward to more updates! It has some of my favorite tropes but such unique execution! And I love the addition of elves, will there be more supernatural creatures involved in the future?

I read everything you have up so far and I'm loving the story! The art was amazing too, it really helps you visualize the main character. Great work so far and I'm looking forward to chapter 4!

@vassia I read what you have posted so far and the story really pulls you in. I'm looking forward to learning more about the spouts and how the children arrived on the island. It's such a unique concept so I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it. Another great story added to my sub list

Just read all the way through the latest chapter. Coming from Wattpad where practically all stories are some sort of dark romance, I can say this is a lot better. The main thing I disliked (but that is my personal preference so don’t take is as a problem to correct) is the pacing of the first chapters. I get that you want to go directly to the beginning of the story, but I would have enjoyed more if you slowed down more on analyzing the days that Riona had as a slave. Don’t know, it felt rushed. Other than that, I think that everything is pretty good, I’ll keep reading so be sure to update soon!

I read the first chapter, very interesting story. I love the start of the world building though. I would like a more clear picture of what the world is before the time skip.