Just read all the way through the latest chapter. Coming from Wattpad where practically all stories are some sort of dark romance, I can say this is a lot better. The main thing I disliked (but that is my personal preference so donāt take is as a problem to correct) is the pacing of the first chapters. I get that you want to go directly to the beginning of the story, but I would have enjoyed more if you slowed down more on analyzing the days that Riona had as a slave. Donāt know, it felt rushed. Other than that, I think that everything is pretty good, Iāll keep reading so be sure to update soon!