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[conker205]

Read kitty girl senpai | Tapas Web Community

this novel is one of my favorites and i have to say it's one of best work i really want this novel be a success

[Ordinaryaverageguy]

What is it about? Tell us all some more so we'll want to go read it. The title sounds fun but what really is the story line?

[TheArtistMinty]

I took a quick glance 'cause. I have no life.

You should consider breaking up those big walls of text into chunks with white spaces in between. (Or black spaces here on Tapas I guess. Line Breaks I mean. Since Tapas have no indent for tab)

It's quite difficult to read otherwise. I don't know how you yourself read it while editing.

A lot of readers would appreciate that.

[conker205]

it's a boy name leo in a version of japan where science has evolved to the point where it's ok to make humans with animal like qualities like the main female lead rika has cat ears and a cat tale

[conker205]

thanks for your feedback and i get that it might a little hard to read but this is only place where i feel welcome

[TheArtistMinty]

I didn't mean regarding the context of the story itself.

I meant, it's difficult to read big wall of texts without line breaks for the eyes anywhere, any story. That's pretty universal.

Since there's no indent here on Tapas, you could either use line breaks, or sometimes I see people putting 5 spaces in a row for an makeshift indent too, though rarely.

Either way though. It's very difficult to imagine someone reading big wall of texts without any line breaks or indents. Anywhere.

[conker205]

i know what you meant i just saying thanks for the tip i will keep it in mind for future projects that i work on

[Ordinaryaverageguy]

Something that would help you with breaking up the text, as already mentioned, would be better use of punctuation. Presently, there's too few periods, leaving a lot of run-on sentences. It's a bit distracting to have to be guessing where the sentence I'm reading ends and a new one begins. Perhaps an editor could help. I'm guessing English may not be your primary language?