I finished reading it! Told you it would take a while.
Overall: Your story is interesting, with a frenetic energy that suffuses the whole work. The action is fun, the dialog works mostly, and it keeps exposition to a minimum while keeping all the action character-driven.
Art: The art is mostly functional, in that I can almost always tell what is going on. There is a lot of energy and motion, and the shots are generally dynamic. On the other hand, I find it garish and ugly, which makes it hard to look at. While I'd prefer more harmonious colors and more steady linework, not every series needs to be painterly.
All the characters are distinct, and you frequently have interesting character designs. For as stylized as your style is, it's impressive that the characters are so distinct, and I never had trouble telling them apart. Sometimes I have trouble reading their emotions or actions, especially Kno's where there's no dialog to help.
Story: I don't like GL stories, so I'll just say that the romance parts feel cliche and I preferred to skip over them. Someone who does enjoy GL could give you a better review of that portion. I find the magical mystery adventure parts to be dynamic and entertaining, your story shines best when off of earth among entirely fantastical beings discussing unfathomable events and mysterious rules.
You do an excellent job of making every character's choices drive the story events. Despite the many wild and zany characters and events, I never feel lost on who is who and what they want. That's an element that many writers struggle with, so big kudos for that.
Keep it up!
