I feel like I resonate with the pie charts a bit.
I've dropped many novels on Tapas immediately after the first paragraph. Most of the time it's due to poor sentence structure or dropping me into the deep end of the pool, not giving me a damn floaty until we're like three chapters in.
As a reader, off the top of my head:
-Don't use the same word five times between three sentences. It's like, listening to someone who like, says "like" too much.
-Don't expect me to follow along with your story if you drop multiple plot-specific nouns that are obviously important to the character(s) but just make me feel like I'm reading a language I don't know. Mentioning key figures or places or things within the context of their importance or even a tiny suggestion of what they could be is important.
-Don't sound like a complaining child if you write in first-person.
-Don't, for fuck sake, introduce someone without describing them and then several episodes later DESCRIBE THEM AND RUIN MY VISION OF THE CHARACTER THUS FAR.
-Don't assume everyone wants to read the detailed historical archives of the world you've made. Early information of your vision needs to be easy to digest. Once the reader is invested, they'll appreciate a long-ass history lesson because they like your world.
-Take everything I say with a grain of salt. I am a rambling idiot with no credentials.