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Aug 2017

Hi everyone! Nice to meet you all!

I am Cassava, your friendly neighborhood tapioca! :grinning:
I've been lurking around here for quite awhile now and has finally decided to sign up and write a novel. This is my first attempt at publishing a novel online, so any feedback will be welcomed! I am mainly a Sci-Fi and Fantasy geek, but I am fine with any genre too!

My novel: Of Steel and Stones10
Please feel free to take a look at my novel! I am always on the look out for something to read, so feel free to recommend your works to me too! :smile:
Once again, glad to be here!

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Oh hey. Same here, I kinda am new here, and signed up for Tapas a little less than a month ago.
I'm Heliox. Nice to meet you guys. I CAN write any genre, and I'm open for any co-op work, just as long it doesn't involve my 0% art skills.
Please feel free to look at my novel, Background People: https://tapas.io/series/Background-People2
Welcome to Tapas, Cassava, and I hope you enjoy your time here.

Oh hey there friend :smiley: Nice to see you on the forums. Welcome to Tapas <3

Hi Heliox! Just read through Background People! :grinning:
Will be waiting for the next chapter!
I would like to do a co-op work one of these days!(Once I get better at writing, that is :grin:) I can definitely relate to having 0% art skill too!

I just started reading and it looks good! I have one little critique thou. Most people don't say the name of the person they are taking to very often. Other than that I am intrigued with where the story is going.

Aye. I'll also be waiting for your next chapter. Stuff's getting a whole lot interesting in those parts, I'm telling you.
You're also pretty good at writing...can I ask your opinion on how to keep the story going? Because I'm kinda worried that it is becoming kinda bit draggy in the drafts...
But yeah, best of luck to you for everything else!

Oh yes, I do agree with that! I'll try and find more ways for names of characters to be introduced naturally! Thanks for the feedback! :grin: I will take note for my subsequent chapters!

Yeah, hope to see more writers around these parts too! :grinning:
Hmm, may I know what do you mean by "draggy"? As for me, I tend to end a chapter when there is a change in scenario or when someone just made an noteworthy statement. I think the impact of the statement will be stronger this way. This is just my two cents though! :slight_smile: So far, just from your introductory chapter, your story still piques my interest!
Best of luck to you too!

Oh....okie! Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on Chapter 3 soon.

Hii there! Welcome to World of comics and books!

Welcome to Tapas, I hope you'll make friends and find that we are all nice enough people!

Welcome to Tapas.
Honestly, I've been here since March 2015, but I'm new to this too, so I need help with you...
The best advice I can give you is expect nothing, but be thankful for everything, and to also make friends along the way. Connect for the sake of growth, not business.
Nice to meet you too, I'm Cydonia.

Hi! :grin: I'm already thankful for the warm welcome I've been receiving!
Yeap, definitely for growth! Hope I will improve much more with the help of the forum than when I was writing alone. It can be hard without some friends to share one's writing woes with!
Nice knowing you too! :grinning: