This is an interesting one to review. It's a very well drawn and written superhero comic that makes great use of public domain characters like Phantoma, but I also found the structure really confusing. Pages and segments seemed to repeat in places, and the sections with the ads interspersed, while a fun nod to print comics, felt hard to get through.
I think the biggest hurdle for me was the lack of a point of view character. It was like reading the space-opera-esque 80s X-men stuff, like the Dark Phoenix Saga, or one of the big DC multiverse type stories, but without establishing an emotional connection to anyone in order to make me really care about the outcome or understand the stakes on a human level. The prose was extremely well written, and it reminded me of the epic melodrama of Claremont or even Moore's work in a good way, but there was so much of it, pages and pages of feeling lost in a huge, dizzying multiverse without an emotional anchor, which with the repetition of pages made me feel like I was wandering in circles.
The art is great, I sort of wish it was in bold, pulpy colours, but I understand that colour would be more work on top of a comic that already has excellent, detailed line work and strong use of values. It nicely balances a modern digital look with a pulp feel, so it's hard to complain.
Honestly it's really just the repetition of pages and lack of a PoV character that make the comic hard to get into. I absolutely wanted to enjoy it because everything else is very high quality here.