I think it's going well so far. You are doing a great job of capturing your reader's attention. And the detail is on point. I was a little confused in the prologue because I thought Aoi already closed her journal, or did I read that wrong? But other than that, the story is charming.
So, I couldn't find your discord, but I'll try again. If you are interested in a writing group, I know a warm and welcoming one. I have had some amazing help with getting my writing more on point.
I really love your story, and it does have that anime movie vibe to it. I'm very hooked.