Heck yeah! The team and I are always down for a good crit! We're pretty new to the comic world (we're heavily based in a background of animation, not sequential art), and we can take all the help we can get.
The comic my team and I make is Kamikaze. It's a dustbowl, cyberpunk, action-drama which takes a bit of Mirrors Edge, a bit of Mad Max, and equal parts Blade Runner to make something we thought was pretty awesome.
It's a story driven series, and episode one is ALMOST done. Currently we're at 70+ pages! I'm told it's a quick and easy read though. I hope you'll enjoy it!
Take off the kid gloves, dig down deep and let me know what you think!