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Oct 2019


Hi, I just spent several months revising and improving this comic book, and would like to get opinions on the results. I left the first four pages as they were because they show the process of experimentation I went through as I figured out what style I was going to use (though I may re-draw these pages in the future).

Any input on further improvements I might make are much appreciated. Thanks for taking the time to read!

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I feel like your comic would fit in a newspaper and maybe instagram?, and I'm not sure why, but your writing reminds me a lot of Tom Gauld comics!

(not a critic, it's actually fancy and cool to read, but it can also be hard for readers who likes easy to read stories with more common used words :thinking:)

And one thing I'd recommend is to increase the font, it looks small on my phone

I just binged it. While I may not have the necessary science background to catch all the in-jokes, I enjoyed it a lot. Especially all the dry humor, and all the interesting concepts littering the story. You should turn this into a movie script and send it to Wes Anderson. :slight_smile:
The art style fits the tone of the story and is more expressive than I at first gave it credit for. Thanks for letting us read this for free, cause I would have payed for this.