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I've been posting some comics on Tapas for over six months now and I felt it might be time to directly seek some input. My comic is in a choose your own adventure style. I update every Thursday and each 'episode' is a stand aone piece. Each with a different theme/story/arstyle etc. Below I link to my latest, and to randomly chosen older ones. Feel free to criticise others. I do know that the qualiy is variable, but I wanted to try different things.

The latest is the story of a bird finding its nest:

Another concerns escaping an alien:

Another is trying to buy a house:

The last is a goold old fashioned western:

Be as critical as you wish!

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Very interesting concept. I've heard of choose your own adventure novels before, but this is the first time I've seen it in webcomic form.

I know that the appeal of this genre is the vast number of outcomes, but I think you should eliminate the paths that lead to nowhere. For example, there is one path in The Lost Bird episode where you fly to a construction site, only to fly away again. It doesn't further the plot or affect you in the long run, so it doesn't make any difference even if it's taken out.

Good luck with your comic! :slight_smile:

I'm not a fan of the art. I highly value artistic sense, style, and skill when it comes to comic making, so it actually deters me from the fun of getting to pick my own story.

In terms of marketability, it would be good if you could state in your series summaries that it's a "choose your own adventure" story, so people who love that kind of concept are more likely to click and play along. Because you didn't mention it in your summary, your summary is rather bland, short, and lacks much of a hook required to get readers to click. Once you clearly state your market / target audience, people who were fans of the famous Homestuck webcomic (originally a webcomic in which readers could decide the next action of characters) are very likely to try your comics out.

Your series summaries also make references such as "As seen in [insert outside reference]", which make it even harder for new readers to access because they feel like there's a hurdle of needing prior knowledge to get what you're referencing. What if I never read Hobart? And what if I don't know what The International Journal of Nuclear and Particle Physics is? Are you gonna link us to the original source somewhere in your comic so we can read that too?