Sorry that this took a bit long, but I read your comic earlier today and I really like it! I could really see the inspiration taken from other comics; reading it reminded me a lot of the Archie comics I used to read when I was younger.
As far as things that could be improved on, for the most part there were just minor quick fixes. For starters, some of the individual panel images looked to have low qualities, occasionally more so than others. This can be fixed by just drawing in as big a resolution as you're going to have in the final upload, and making sure you don't compress the picture until the very end. Another minor thing was just in the lineart- you clearly use shape tools for the characters, which is fine, but it's jarring when a character is next to a tree or tuft of grass that was drawn in a very spiky, ridged manner. There's a setting called either "correction" or "softness" that a lot of drawing applications have, which basically smooths out your pen lines, and this might be able to help. Last for the quick fixes is the colors: the color scheme for the comic is a bit all over the place, with the super bright purples and yellows and greens. It might help if you toned down the value on the background colors so that they pop a bit less, which would let the composition direct us to see the characters a bit better. Another thing is that I would like to see some personality in the characters. There are a lot of them, and the story is very plot driven, but it would be nice to just get a bit more of a feel for their personalities than which one is a ball hog. However, the current plot you've set up looks like it has plenty of room for us to see more of the characters, so I'm really excited for it. And, last note on improvement overall, your comic is very text-heavy. I'm not sure about other's opinions on this, but personally, when I read a comic, I don't want to be directing my time at words when its a medium based on storytelling through pictures. The amount of text for dialogue is fine, but I'll admit I did glaze over some of the bits at the top of every strip.
Now, onto the positives! I know I mentioned this a bit to start, but I really like the general comic book "aesthetic" of your comic. The interactions, characters, world, and the typesetting all work really well together to feel very reminiscent of a traditional older comic. The plot seems basic at face value, but it kept me hooked the whole way through. The main character has a distinct and memorable silhouette, and all the characters have memorable and original names and expressive faces so I never had to guess what they were feeling. And despite how simple both the overall style and the backgrounds were, they never detracted from the comic as a whole-- detail can often decrease efficiency when it comes to webcomics, so it's good that the simple art works so well here. Lastly, I just wanted to shoutout the grammar really fast. I often come across webcomics that... could really use an editor, but the grammar in your comic always flowed and there were no hiccups that broke me away from just being able to read along, if that makes sense.
So, in all, I really liked your comic, and I'm super excited about the current storyline. Good luck, and I'll be staying tuned!