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Sep 2018

Interior shot of everyone working hard in the bridge!

Drawing a ship is one thing, drawing two ships another... but two ships actually connected is definitely more difficult! I also forgot to add in the damage from the battle so I have to fix up this panel later too...

I am so glad I have a minimum of characters in my story, so I don't have to worry about crowd shots >.<

Though this may not look so difficult, I had a hard time with this panel. Especially that table that didn't align with the rest of the perspective >.< also I'm not strong in environments.

spire doesnt have a lot of fancy backgrounds at the moment but this alley always takes a while to draw

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and im not at this scene yet but heres a background i premade for chapter 4, i had some trouble with the lineart layer and had to manually splice it into the fore/midground

That's such a tough question to answer! There are soooo many panels that were a challenge, I think I draw something like that almost every other page. But I guess this one would be the hardest, at least of the recent pages.


Not so much because of the perspective, but because being someone who doesn't drink I don't have a whole lot of experience with what a bar looks like. I had to observe the shit out of tons of bar pics, and I still wasn't totally sure what goes into the layout of one as far as what's tools are mandatory, and how the placement works. It was also tough with the bar patrons since I was drawing other creator's super stylized character in my style.

paint tool sai :confused: its a great program, but it doesnt have a perspective tool. I use reference images for things like this.

tip for you. for something like that closed shutter i would just draw three lines on a layer and the copy the layer and move it until i have enough to complete the shutter then flatten them together. it's quicker than drawing all them lines.

Hey, this looks pretty cool. I love the composition in it!!
I really like how isolated she looks, framed by all this stuff. The broken window is just icing on the cake.
Pretty good job, friend!


I always post this on these topics because it took me months just to get right. I was never happy with it on and off working on it and trying just to balance it so its not too cluttered and can easily be focused on. I don't think i've ever took this long to make a single panel lol

This really looks good!
Can I suggest something? I'm not sure if it would work
but try to have the upper panel so it would cover the diagonal
panel below, so they be closer together. I think it would make for a better
flow. hope that's ok to say :slight_smile:

Ramiek, I can see what you're saying. And I'm seeing another change with that upper panel too! Right now, I'm doing my comic in the scroll down/full color way of Tapas and Webtoons. It would be interesting to convert this and I can see that upper panel blending into the bottom...maybe not even having that panel border. Thank you for your fresh outlook, it's something to play with and see how it turns out.