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Aug 2021

The shading is perfect for the story you're going to tell. Good use of dramatic lighting to indicate mood, and tension. looks awesome in black and white. It's going to look amazing in dynamic scenes with a lot of motion, too!! Your art is great, keep it up ^-^

Your colors are great!! You're good at creating contrast with lots of different very vivid highlight colors. Helps the shading stand out, too. You also have excellent use of panel layout!! Makes everything flow very well.

Here is my comic!

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this is ADORABLE T-T I was obsessed with raccoons as a kid, so I have a soft spot for this!!! :DD But yea I really like the black background, it makes everything feel comforting, I guess, I can't exactly explain it. But I like its vibe, and the vibe of the illustrations as well. Works really well with the little comics

I'd really love to hear what you like AND dislike! I hope you enjoy!

You've nailed the 80s vibe. Both in the colors, and in the backgrounds (like the blends of colors, as well as the more detailed ones) and the times you use the neon lights effects are wonderful. Really like the brush you use for the lineart, as well!! AMAZING!!

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I always look out for character design in anthro media, and I think you did super well with it!!! each design is expressive, and unique but they also work well with each other and the general fantasy-style color palette.

Oooooo yes!! Ok so I like the worldbuilding, I think it's a really cool concept for a sci-fi, and I feel like it's a world that has a lot to explore and a lot of good thematic elements. I really like Reiji's narration. Always preferred the first person narration style for this reason, so I could understand the character more, and I think that works great for him and his personality.

I'd like to see more descriptions of the setting, I feel like it'd help the atmosphere, and help the dialogue transition better!!

I'm happy to hear it! thank you for checking it out, I hope you enjoyed. I'm working on descriptions and dialogue the most currently, and a new chapter will be out by Saturday. Thanks again!

Can I post my novel even?

really like the magic system!! Love anything with magi-tech, it immediately makes a fantasy story more interesting and cool to visualize. I love the concept of magical engineers, and generally all the ways it's incorporated into the fantasy setting, and the action scenes

Your writing style does a great job capturing the horror elements, it's somber but introspective seeming, especially when you narrate the emotions and more abstract situations. And very intriguing world building, too! Seems really complex and rich, good dystopian atmosphere.

I'm really glad you think so I hope you like reading far but thank you for that it definitely motivating


Hey this is a sci-fi/fantasy comic with a pinch of comedy which bring new light of thought to aliens throwing the stereotypical type of aliens over type roof. The art is not very good from ep-1-3 but from ep 4 there is a major glow up so please check it out and dont forget to rate!