Share your favorite line from the most recent chapter you've written/released (+ your link)

Sassystar 2024-05-18 16:54:42 UTC #61

Dion Atlantus, the embodiment of power and majesty, rose from the waters, his form bathed in the radiant glow of the blazing sun above.

Leyelle 2024-05-25 13:50:06 UTC #62

“Si. Si - I’m a monster. I’m an absolute jerk. You love me and I don’t love you. So scream at me, fuss at me, call me an idiot - bully - a silver-spoon mamma’s boy who doesn’t understand a thing about what it’s like to actually have to suffer in life. Fine. But if you love me so much more than I could possibly ever love you, do me one favor...”

Mansi_Gu 2024-05-25 19:56:02 UTC #63

Mephistopheles muffled a wheeze and coughed when Addai looked at him. "We need to go, kiddo," he offered a hand and helped Mine step outside the room.

SumireHime 2024-05-26 06:07:58 UTC #64

"My heart jumped in my chest like a fish jumping out of water."

Leyelle 2024-05-26 13:01:55 UTC #65

I can’t tell if I’m an angel or a demon. His savior, or just one more thread in the puppet strings-

this is available for free for everyone to read on my Patreon public posts

roguemonte 2024-05-27 12:24:47 UTC #66

"I think I won't grace you with mercy today."

You can found out why

Leyelle 2024-05-27 19:04:30 UTC #67

I take his chin in my hand so he can’t look away, and smile so he knows it’s okay. He smiles back at me now, and his eyes squint like he’s staring at the sun.

Leyelle 2024-05-31 19:23:28 UTC #68

There’s something disturbing about the way Kattar threw ‘Korean’ to the wind.

I feel nauseated like I just watched him sever his body from the waist down and toss his legs into the sea.

And something in his face tells me that it’s every bit as painful as that sounds.

Mansi_Gu 2024-06-05 19:50:02 UTC #69

"A spider," Mephistopheles said. "It was a spider. His Grace was terrified of such a cruel monster," he said, disappointed and muffling his laughter.

binahwrites 2024-06-05 20:00:12 UTC #70

"This one is the first freckle I noticed when I met you above your lip it looks like a tiny heart, you can't cover them you can't deny the world of their cuteness Ozwald!"

Leyelle 2024-06-07 20:05:31 UTC #71

There are some burns we keep personal.

Our inheritance is a cursed heirloom.

aquashark 2024-06-07 20:08:38 UTC #72

this is unreleased content from my sceduled chapter because why not?

I began to panick at the sight of my lack-of arm and screamed in pain, i was not bleeding but a burning cold was travelling down my arm. I got to work and forced my mana into my left arm letting it flow down to my missing flesh, I began to let the mana do what it did best and my skin started to heal.

(there might be spelling mistakes since i havent proof read it yet.)

HostileFren 2024-06-07 23:55:12 UTC #73

I just wrote this little section here and couldn't help but think that it deserves a spot in this thread. I haven't done any proofreading or even finished the chapter yet lol but here it is:

“That's really-” Hallies enthusiastic response halted on the tip of her tongue at the ominous sound that had filtered its way through the trees that upon closer look now resembled gnarled hands reaching in to grab her. She wished she could hush the once comforting sound of a crackling fire to make sure she isn’t missing any more noises. Because something was definitely out there.

This chapter probably won't come out until the end of June or beginning of July but it's from this series

Kittykir1129 2024-06-08 21:46:50 UTC #74

“You call that proof!? You won’t get away with trying to frame me like that!” Then, he turned to the people watching him from below. Melodramatically, he said for the entire room to hear, “My dear brother just accused me of embezzlement. I’m formally challenging that bastard to a duel.”

binahwrites 2024-06-08 21:50:32 UTC #75

"Get lost gorilla! You are killing the mood!" Paolo snapped at him, "Gorilla? I beg your pardon I do not think I look like one, I will also have you know I took the ever trusty "what animal are you?" personality test and it clearly said Lion"

Leyelle 2024-06-10 17:03:05 UTC #76

Wait! if you haven't finished the chapter yet how do you know if this will be how it finally appears in the story?!!!

Leyelle 2024-06-14 19:04:37 UTC #77

Watching Kattar get into the passenger seat feels like watching time have a heart attack - fall to pieces and bleed together - young face on an old man's body in a slow state of collapse like un-growing - degenerating.

The flowers un-sprout and are swallowed by the earth - right at the moment when they should have bloomed-

Leyelle 2024-06-20 14:59:19 UTC #78

I wince at the noise that seems to bounce off everything in the room just to crash into me.

TanyaBestLaidPlans 2024-06-20 16:52:43 UTC #79

Loving the quotes I'm seeing here! Our creativity as a community is amazing.

Here's my quote:

Apparently, Regina was going to be murdered the night before her engagement, shortly before her would-be fiancé came to serenade her-

–And her assassin was still lurking in the shadows, watching poor, helpless Artem sing to his never-bride’s corpse.

Nothing like a villainess who knows she's about to die if she doesn't take action immediately!

Leyelle 2024-06-22 14:49:47 UTC #80

-And if I could catch this firefly in a bottle and trap this bottle in time-

I hope I can always remember him looking at me with such gentle, unbridled, unmasked affection.